by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere Nov 2, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
[[This is the future I would love to go down and live in. So if you don`t like it dont vote on it or comment on it. This poems means ALOT to me!]] |
Oh, and i think you summed up every girls' perfect fantasy, and you did it wonderfully! |
ShuTTers |
by Letty
This was a very well thought out and picture perfect poem. I do have one suggestion though: You may want to put it into stanzas and add more punctuation so that it can be easier for the reader to follow. Overall, I think that this is a wonderfull poem and even if I didn't who am I to crush your dreams. 5/5 Keep up the wonderful work hun. |
by Ashla
Awww.. 100/5. Your a great writer! I love your poems. I really liked this one cuz it showed how much you think the future holds for you! |
This really seems like a perfect future and I would love for mine to somewhat like that! Incredible imagery aswell! |