You`re so lucky to have your dreams all planned out and perfect. There`s so much detail... it`s a very original poem and one of your best. I love the amount of feeling and emotions you put into this.

This was so sweet...I really liked the imagery, you went into so much detail but managed to keep my attention all the way through.
The other reason I enjoyed it so much was because it is original in concept and full of emotion.
5/5

This really seems like a perfect future and I would love for mine to somewhat like that! Incredible imagery aswell!

xxEvilAngelxx

Awww.. 100/5. Your a great writer! I love your poems. I really liked this one cuz it showed how much you think the future holds for you!

This was a very well thought out and picture perfect poem. I do have one suggestion though: You may want to put it into stanzas and add more punctuation so that it can be easier for the reader to follow. Overall, I think that this is a wonderfull poem and even if I didn't who am I to crush your dreams. 5/5 Keep up the wonderful work hun.

Best wishes
Letty

P.S. I am sorry that it took me so long to return your comments, but I have been very busy with family matters and such lately.

ShuTTers
Beside the windows
AN all-around porch around the house
focus

I am determined to be a great mother
To always be there for them
To always tell them words of advice when they need it
And to love them and my husband like no other
^ So i'm sorry was about your mother? and fate? thought so!

job well done!

Narc xxx

Oh, and i think you summed up every girls' perfect fantasy, and you did it wonderfully!

Narc xxx