Hey you're good. I like your poem. It had a lot of meaning in it. Deep my friend very deep. 5/5 from me
Burning~Wings

Thank you... I'm kinda begginer, but I really try hard... It was a Dream I had...

Now that was diffrent, witch in my book is a major plus. The word choice was perfect, the style origanl, and the emtion was strong. wonderfully written expecially for a beginner. 5/5

Oh my god that was realy good!!!

Wow!!! that was so awsome, but very sad. i give it a 5/5

I thought it was wonderful, very deep. you've really got talent.