The poem is very interesting so far the only quatrain that confused me is

I couldn't seen to understand
Why we rarely say my mum
Couldn't see my dads reasoning for safety
Didn't know my mom was taken over by rum

I couldn't seem to understand?
Why we rarely saw my mum ?
Couldn't see my dads reasoning for safety
Didn't know my mom was taken over by rum

Wow you've been through alot!!! your really good at writing! keep up the great work and thanx for the comment!!

This is soo awesome I cant wait to read the next bit! thanks for the comment btw:)