That was a good poem. You had some grammar and spelling issues but if you fix those, your poetry will be great! You had a lot of power behind your words.

Thats really really good. i definitally know the feeling :/ keep it up :D

I actually really loved it. It was real and had a lot of emotion. It's how i feel sometimes too.

and dont worry. I bet that you're great. and he couldnt see that maybe u just werent meant to be. You'll find someone that loves you for you.

That came from the heart, it was really good...........I mean really really good

This is a very nice poem, i like it alot...i can see why you reallly like this poem, and u put alot of work to it...

Omg thats really sad...
I know how you feel when people you like just don't see the signs...that must have been hard for you...but you did what you had to do so he could be happy..and i'm sure that took alot of strength and its also a very excellent poem i give ya a 5!!!!

Awww...wow this has got to be one of the saddest poems i have ever read but i liked it...& u were being a good friend...maybe in the long run...he'll start to like u too like that...cuz i was kinda in the same boat be4 but it wasnt my best friend but he was my friend & now we r together so maybe it will work out i hope u the BEST!!!!!

I know how you feel i've gone through that before, but now i'm alright and i found someone that i can call my own...I hope the same goes for you as what happened to me...or maybe that guy will realise that you're everything to him...

Omg.... ouch babe.... i feel for u, seriously. i hope ur ok? try smile :)

It flowwed really well, keep it up!

I really enjoyed this poem! It was very well written...a sad story but one that almost everyone can understand or relate to. Good job! Jpoet*

Its great i like it by katie AKA angelchild420_2005@yahoo.com

Aww its amazing...
and veryy sad =[[

im sorry u had to go through feelings like those...i know how it is.....im sorry =[[

Wow, this poem is amazing.
I know exactly what you mean, something very similar happened to me. Except the girl was my best friend... :(
I really like this poem.

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I loved this.
I thought it was very well written.
It flowed very well, and it was such a touching piece.
Well done.

Wow, this was an amazing piece. It describes exactly what is taking place between me and a friend. I attempted to write a poem like this, but the words just didn't flow together. Thank you for a great poem, I enjoyed reading it.

--Namida

This is really good ! keep it up!

That was a really heart felt poem.....i just wished it was longer...!

loving this poem to bits and pieces ^_^

GREAT JOB! i absolutely loved it

I know it had to be hard for you to watch the love of your life love another girl. this poem is so great and it is so sad! i almost started crying.