Battles

by Gem   Nov 3, 2006


I really wish I didn't feel this way
Cos it's starting to get to me
It's taking over my waking thoughts
And haunting me in my dreams

She is always hanging around
And I know what she's waiting for
It's you she wants, it's obvious
I'm noticing it more and more

How can you be so utterly blind?
It's not like she's being discreet
I'm starting to feel I'm being pushed out
I'm her obstacle she needs to beat

She makes me feel like I'm worth f*(k all
And that you can do so much better
I'm starting to reach my breaking point
I just wish I'd never met her

I've given her so many chances
There's not much more I can do
It's like some kind of sickening war
As she battles me for you... ©

*Gem*

(She's like a bad smell, she just won't go away!!! x)

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "I've given her so many chances
    There's not much more I can do
    It's like some kind of sickening war
    As she battles me for you..."

    This is a great stanza! I loved the poem! Very emotional! Lovely!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    Brilliant. But remember i think guys usually are oblivious to this kind of thing. Just make sure your anger gets directed to the right person (or poetry is a good outlet hee hee). What i am trying to say is i think it is a great poem and i love the story behind it.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Strong emotion, nice write! guess ur really frustrated

  • 18 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    He loves you so you have nothing to worry about :))

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    WOW thats a really good poem and is it aimed at a certain bucket??

    EWWW le Bucket haha!
    the poem was well written too =]=]=]
    Fab poem as usual Gem

    wuvz ya x x x x

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