Wow this is really good , keep up the good work.
mary

I loved it it was so good :):)

That's so sweet I love it Great job! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Nice. real nice. thanks for sharing
that with.

Woah, you're a really good song/poem writer, you should be a singer =)
Thanx for the comment on my poem!

This a very heartfelt and beautiful song. Good job!

Great job. I bet a lot of people can relate to this. Wonderful read and a nice tribute to someone deserving.

This is really emotional and well penned, succint yet so meaningful, well done!

Well...i cant imagine how you could put that into a song but i think it would be a chart topper if you could...great poem/song/whatever it is :P

5/5 from me

I personally think that this is your best poem out of them all. 5/5 for sure! I really liked how you had written this. It had a really nice flow.

Comment #5:

This had an X factor to it and I loved it! It was truly beautiful Charisma! I mean the talent shown here is amazing, especially because it's so personal to you and yet you still worded it wonderfully. Sometimes when something's really personal to me I just write to get it out and it has no form what-so-ever but this flowed REALLY well. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun