This is a wonderful story poem written. I can relate "There are some lessons from this fact,
When you love them tell them exact.'
i vote you 5/5 maybe you can check out my poem i written today

Well written...first loves suck when they are over...i have the most wonderful memories in the world...the pictures that make them tangible...and yet i wish i had none...with no memories i could movve on and not wish he was still mine. but yea i can relate even though we havent been apart long...he pulled the whole "were better apart" but i guess he was talking about himself anwyas nice poem good job :)

I like this one too Vonny. A sad tale indeed. Is it true?