by x.Athame.x Nov 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Glistening blade, oh so sharp |
I love this poem... its true and real... It perfect. 5/5 |
Wow ! I'm falling in love with your poetry and I'm adding you to my favorites! The only thing I would change is in the last line: Those pains, m'dear, never sleep--- I would replace "m'dear" with "just" or "will"... Other than that, Incredible write! |