Wow. Thats an amazing poem. Sad, but beautiful in its own way. Great Job. 5/5

Great job once again,
once again you have proved that you are the best poet.......... keep it up. nothing less than a 5/5 cause you really deserve it.

Hey this is an awesome poem! Great work of imagery and its actually really suspenseful! i was on the edge of my seat. Its sad but i really got the emotion of what you were talking about. good work!! *kayla*

Soo beautifully written another great piece keep it up cant wait for more 5/5

Great poem couldn't of done better myself
keep up the good work

A very unique poem. I have never read one like it. The story told was chillingly amazing, i felt as though i was stuck in that coffin. Great imagery and flow. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Ooo. I like all the darkness in this. I got that the girl wasn't dead when they put her in the ground. But you may have just been talking about the afterlife. I wasn't quite sure. Lol.

The flow was good, excellent actually lol. Better than most of my poems anyways. =P The rhymes were good, but I only have one suggestion for one of the stanzas.

[Laid comfortably against soft cushions
Surrounded by locked wood on all sides
Suddenly awakening; frozen with fear
Panic slowly taking over her insides..]
^^I don't think I would've used 'sides' and 'insides' for rhyming. I just thought they were too similar to be rhyming words.

The imagery you displayed though was excellent. It really brought out how death can come upon a person. Well done. =) 5/5 xxoo

Samantha

I like the story to this one. Very well written. =]
Keep it up.

Wow, that was really good. I loved it. The flow and the Rhyme scheme, was really good. And the words you used and the way you used them was awesome. I am not really into dark poems, but yours was written very good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Well, first off, I really loved the title of this poem! It really draws the reader in without even reading anything yet. The descriptions were amazing. They really created a picture for me and I felt like I was watching it happen and I actually got shivers down my spine from it. The ending was a little confusing for me at first because I thought she was dying but I reread the last stanza a few times and then it created a deeper meaning for me. Which was great. You have a talent Darling.

5/5

-Jenna.

I like your first line, it was a great attention catcher! ;-)
your words are very...let's just say "well put" they make sense even though it seems confusing, i like that it's kind of tricky.
great job, 5;5

WOW.
Words can not express how I feel about this poem.
In short, I absolutely loved it.
I thought everything about it, the wording, the flow, the rhyme scheme, the imagery was perfect.
Very well done.

I didn't comment on all of them. If you want me to comment, just tell me. This poem seems to be talking about being buried alive. Is that right?