Hey, i like your poem, i like the story line in it. therez not too many poems like this one, itz good!! :) hey, if you get the time hav a look at sum of my poemz, and tell me wat u think, thank you!! :)

Wow..i really like it..tell me..how did you come up with this idea...what does this world of yours look like..and why are you meant to destroy it?

Beautiful work...you have amazing talent...keep it up so i can read more from you!