Very short and sad. I loved it.

This is wonderful. 5/5

I like this...especially the first stanza

Bittersweet perfection,
Brings a tear-drop to my eye,
You always want- what you cannot get,
Now spread those wings and fly,

I sense alot of meaning in those lines. Overall it was a pretty good poem, and I'll rate it 5. I only have one tip for you...and that's to try to maintain a consistent rhyme scheme throughout. have the same lines rhyme for the entire thing..you know, like aabb(which is what I normally do or abab(some people pull it off well). just something simple like that can make your poetry soooo much better. Just a suggestion though...

Great Job, I'll definitely keep an eye on you

I absolutley loved it. ecspecially this part "Bittersweet perfection,
Brings a tear-drop to my eye,
You always want- what you cannot get,
Now spread those wings and fly,"
so much emotion and sadness. I rated 5/5

Awww.. this is really good to. you had my attention by the title and kept it all the way through. loved it x

This was such a sad write but very well done! Good job!

Wow, that was amazing. Such vivid emotions and descriptions. Perfect.

Bittersweet perfection,
Brings a tear-drop to my eye,
You always want- what you cannot get,
Now spread those wings and fly,

^ My favorite lines! =] Wonderful. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! =] 5/5

Stephanie

This is awesome thx for the comment and this is an awesome peom good job i loved it and ive never read the book and now i dont think i wanna lol but who knows maybe i will good job i loved it

keenan

Wow thats rele rele good. that was such a good book my class just finished it today.
well written.

Wow i really like this poem ..its very sad