Boy your savin me!!!

by Emily McCarter   Nov 3, 2006


My heart goes crazy at the sight of you.
My mind love your voice.
I have to tell you something.
Your saving me!!!
yesterday i was a nobody.
Nobody ever saw me
But though all the tears, and heartbroken years.
You stand at the end of this lighted hall.
Your Savin me!!!!
At this moment you have my heart in my hands.
So please don't let go.
because your savin my heart for them pain that other boy brang.
Your makin my heart fall more
Let me tell you I'm scared
I'm falling to fast for you
And it makin me wossie
But your still savin!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    I like this poem, it has such a nice feel to it..a job well done! PS i gave it 5!

  • 17 years ago

    by mellmer

    This is pretty good but you should work on it more. make it flow a bit better. try to make more sense of it. but again, it's good :)