Comments : Boy your savin me!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mellmer

    This is pretty good but you should work on it more. make it flow a bit better. try to make more sense of it. but again, it's good :)

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    I like this poem, it has such a nice feel to it..a job well done! PS i gave it 5!