I was feeling this EXACT same way about a week ago and almost decided to write on it but the words wouldn't come out on paper, this described my feelings (as I'm sure it will others too) very well, and you had good choice of words as well! I enjoyed this read!
Krissey

Very nice poem... i liked the idea, it's different... try to convey a little more emotion though, put a little more into it... go a little deeper... nice job though

Nice poem

Wow, great job. . and thank you for reading my poem. you are a great writer, so use your talent even more. 5/5

Bloomed Rose

OMG!! i never read anything like this, and i've been looking for poems like this one! this really ralates to me a lot! and the poem was really great. one time i wrote a poem similar to this, but this is better. lol. great job!!!

Very well written, towards the end I felt the flow was not as good though. The rhymes were great. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

5/5. I cant say which i liked the best I just did. Great write

Great. Speechless. 5/5, and keep up the great work.!

I liked the use of colour to enhance the mood. I loved the final stanza I feel it summed up the theme of irredeemable guilt well.

Wow. You put a lot of deep emotions into this poem. I know how it feels to feel guilt in your life and I have had my fair share of it too. :) Great flow and great choice of wording. You've got a lot of talent as a writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie