Omg..that is so good. i love it! 5/5

I really like this one. Not only do I see it happening but it teaches a lesson of love and how it can bring you to your knees.

How true jason...how true.
rene you truly have talent i could see the whole thing, and yes it does teach us a lesson. i love poems like this because when it comes from the heart it touches the hearts of others...5/5 too girl, you go girl

Thats an amazing poem! great job :)