by melly xx Nov 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
There tangled in my heart |
Very nicely written, the flow was very good, however I felt the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Overall great poem. |
by Jessica
Awh, wow hun. That was great. The details you put into this were amazing. The flow worked well as did all the emotion. Wow. Nicely done, you have talent! 5/5 |
by x.Athame.x
Mm... very nice poem. Relatively simple, but portrays a lot of meaning. 5/5 |
by ECILA ice
Maybe simplicity and the content attract me to read it..its a nice piece. Good job KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |