Maybe simplicity and the content attract me to read it..its a nice piece. Good job KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Mm... very nice poem. Relatively simple, but portrays a lot of meaning. 5/5

Awh, wow hun. That was great. The details you put into this were amazing. The flow worked well as did all the emotion. Wow. Nicely done, you have talent! 5/5

Very nicely written, the flow was very good, however I felt the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into stanzas would help. Overall great poem.

Peace, Joe