Okay, that was... kind of shocking, the way that it ended in a vision of gore. At first i didn't understand the raise your sword to your ear part, and then... *wince* well, that was some imagery...
WOW.....that was excellent.
The imagery was brilliant, and alot of it creeped me out, the wording and flow were amazing, and I liked the ending.
It was so unexpected and orinigal, and it was my favourite part.