by Italian Stallion Nov 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Every night I lay a sleep |
by Bridgette
I really like this poem. It was so sweet and a very heartfelt write. The last line of the poem really brought it all together and gave it a very nice ending. And I really liked the second stanza, the way that you described everything in that was very sweet and gave a nice visual of love and compassion. You did a great job on this poem. She must be one very lucky girl :) 5/5 Keep it up! |
by swill
Finally joe found someone....WHERES THE PARTY??? lol.. |
OMG how sweet Italian man =] I bet Liz got like the biggest smile ever when she read that =] 5/5 |
by LALA&BOOBOO
I REALLY LIK THIS POEM ITS SO CUTE!...I WISH MY BABY CAN WRITE POEMS BOUT ME!LOLZ... |
by apoet
I liked it, I think it would make a pretty good song. |