:D :D I LOVED IT! It's so beautiful! :) I wish you both the best of luck in the world! :) It sounds like you guys have a lot of love! :)

~~Weeping Willow Spirit (Spanish)

I liked it, I think it would make a pretty good song.

I REALLY LIK THIS POEM ITS SO CUTE!...I WISH MY BABY CAN WRITE POEMS BOUT ME!LOLZ...

OMG how sweet Italian man =] I bet Liz got like the biggest smile ever when she read that =] 5/5

Finally joe found someone....WHERES THE PARTY??? lol..

i'm so glad you did...and its a great poem...try getting a little more descriptive...but this simplicity also makes it stand out...so all in all its awesome!!!

peace, dhaval

I really like this poem. It was so sweet and a very heartfelt write. The last line of the poem really brought it all together and gave it a very nice ending. And I really liked the second stanza, the way that you described everything in that was very sweet and gave a nice visual of love and compassion. You did a great job on this poem. She must be one very lucky girl :) 5/5 Keep it up!