That's great, i really like that!

Well penned you potray here yet flowed with good message, i agree with rob, he said everything what i want to say...awesome written dear friend, keep them coming, take care!

Geez, thats a pretty poem with a good flow... and it actually has a point! 5/5

Hannah-

I hardly ever read poems based on serious reality, and you did an excellent job on this. Everything is so true. My favorite stanza is the last one. It's a strong ending on a serious poem. Thanks for your comment on my poem. =] 5/5

Tammie

This is such a great eye-opener! It is true though! Children should just be children. Great work on this one! I really like it!

-sweet_rebellion

Deana,

What a well written piece of poetry about such a sad problem in our world. I tried to pick out one stanza that I liked the best, but honestly ~ every stanza flows perfectly.

Connie

Amazing.
and it's sad that this is stuff we see everyday. even in small towns, there's stuff like that. it's a state of mind, i guess.

That was amazing.
i loved the last stanza.
the topic is sad, and your writing brings emotion.
good work.

I'm a dangorous kid, but really I don't know how to fight.

5/5.. g/j.. love it

I aint even playing u are really throwing me off my feet...i HAVE to add u to my favorites this is a must. how do u do it. how do u put those word together i been trying to write a poem like this for so ling but i can never put it together