This one is a 5/5 poem by you

I liked the flow of this. Great Job, keep up the wonderful work.

Ciao, Joe

Wow! amazing poem! My only suggestion is to shorten this line by one syllable, the flow was off. "Curtain of torture is this night" Keep it up!

xxEvilAngelxx

Amazing!! Loved the flow of it! Great vocab throughtout it. An excellent read! Keep up the good work! Oh and thanks for your comment! xx

I really like this. it relates to me. i like the first stanza! i think this had a lot of description and you can see her wanting to explode and let poepl kno how she feels. srry if i'm off topic of ur topic. sometimes i get confused. lol.

Hey,
Great poem you are very talented,I could feel the intensity in your words,
I know how you feel if you ever want to talk im always here,
Please comment on some of my poems,
It would be greatly appreciated,
Love cass xoxo

Nice flow, loved this poem. 5/5

I love it!!its like the words reached out of the computer and were like see there are others who hurt like you....keep on writin!!

I absolutely love your poem! i like that you can analogize(word?? idc tho) so well and i really love that about your poem. it kept me reading...

I love your poem, its one of my favorites! 5.0! Keep up the good work! Check out my poems & comment & vote please! Thank You!

I like the way one part led to another great job!

You did a great job on this poem. You can tell that this person was feeling a lot of anger and pain. It has a great flow to it. 5/5

>black&&blue

Wow!
My favourite so far, and I enjoyed the imagery and flow immesnly.
You have a lot of talent.

I really like this poem. I'm not quite sure why though. It just has a very sad but interesting story behind it. I thougth that it was very beautifully written. You definitely did an amazing job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!!

Wonderful imagery created here, and it was a truly beautifully penned poem. I loved it! 5/5.

*Adding you to my favourites. =]

Excellent job. From the very moment I read it, I knew it was gonna be good. Great flow as well.

Wow...this is my favourite of your's so far.
It was such a beautiful write...I loved the rhyme scheme, imagery, flow, everything.
Perfect.

Amazing! =]
Short and simple, yet gets the message across.
You put a lot of emotions into this one and I can tell.
Wonderful flow and excellent vocabulary. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Fabulous poem. My favorite part was:

"Enclosing her in darkness
This cloud of hatred be,
Curtained torture is this night
For none the world to see."

Best wishes, 5/5. Unattractive1

The way you used language in this poem makes it have something particularly strong. I've given you a 5/5 for the language
The concept behind the poem is not clear though; why is the protagonist angry?