by donna
This is so sad :[ very nicely written the flow and rhythm were great.. Just a couple of slight errors.. Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out. |
by dora
Hey darl this was really heartfelt there was a lot of emotion. dnt worry things will work out. very well written though. keep it up xx |
by reality
Wow that poem really touched me cause after me and my baby split up things like that started to happen but we fixed it |
by reality
That really touched me i loved it i went through somethin like that |
This hits home...and it's so sad to think that the love of our lives could be slowly drifting away from us right in front of our eyes. Thank you so much for writing this...it's something that I can totally relate to. |