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  • 18 years ago

    by donna

    This is so sad :[ very nicely written the flow and rhythm were great.. Just a couple of slight errors.. Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out.
    The first line after but.. The 'if' should be 'of' I think..?
    The second line in the last stanza.. Should be 'I' instead of I'm..

    beautifully written and full of emotion.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was really heartfelt there was a lot of emotion. dnt worry things will work out. very well written though. keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by reality

    Wow that poem really touched me cause after me and my baby split up things like that started to happen but we fixed it

  • 18 years ago

    by reality

    That really touched me i loved it i went through somethin like that

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulCutter

    This hits home...and it's so sad to think that the love of our lives could be slowly drifting away from us right in front of our eyes. Thank you so much for writing this...it's something that I can totally relate to.