A beautiful poem. it's rare to find poets with a rhyming ability such as this without sounding corny or cheesy. You did this well...loved the last line! Jpoet*

Hey ror this is really good i love it :)

xoxo
lissa

Omg i love this poem your awsome! also a 5/5 i would give you a 10 if i could but sadly life doesn't think we should give people ten's lol!

Very nice..good meter