Comments : Gone In The Wind

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    The rhyming scheme seemed a bit forced. I felt as if this poem lacked a certain depth; as if you didn't give it your all. anyway keep writing you'll get better. we all have to start from somewhere. when i first started; my poems sucked :) lol

    keep up the good work
    and good luck

    thanks for the comment on my poem; i appreciated it very much love. :)