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by ashley Nov 4, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
It started at a party Me trying to look cool When they offered booze I just couldnt refuse! Theyd label me a fool So off I went With a beer in hand Taking sips Being "The Man" One led to another I didnt feel so well Id have to tell my mother that I was falling ill I found my keys, ready to leave Told myself Id be all right I hadnt drank so much That I couldnt still drive Away I drove In drunken bliss Not one friend Objected to this Out of nowhere came a car I tried to hit my brake Yet In my drunken stupor I was just one second too late Metal is screeching Tires are squealing Glass is shattering All in an instant I lay in the hospital bed My body screaming with pain But thankfully Im told Youll live In a couple of days I learn a horrible truth Though I survived two others had not They were on their way To her parents house To announce That they were engaged He was to be a doctor In just a short two months She was already a teacher Loved by her class very much Because of me Two fine people are dead Many times have I wished It had been me insteadi didnt actually have this happen to me, im just against drunk driving so i thought i would write this to help people understand what can happen
by ShaAnTaNu
A gr8888888888888888888888888888 poem against DRUNK 'n' DRIVE. u r very creative, i must say. 5/
by Marissa
Your poem is really good! I am against drunk driving too! Can't stand it! Keep on writing!