Oh this is a great poem

it rhymes and is so true.

in the poem the story it portrays is so what happens in life. you always feel that they shouldn't have you, that they dont deserve you.

but just remember that that is not true and you just have to keep living and in the end you will end up realising that you were wrong and your life is perfect in your own way.

David

I really like this poem, it's sweet. You did a great job on it! 5/5 for sure...buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Awww angel this is amazing soo full of emotions please dont ever stop writing :))