Comments : Sometimes

  • 18 years ago

    by Richard S

    Wow, what a thoughtful peom. You are new to the site aren't you. Hope to read more from you. You have a talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Welcome to the site. Had to check this out if for no other reason, but your name.

    Such a truthful poem that is thought provoking. Flow was good and content nice.

    Keep it up. Would love to read more of yours.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by Forever Destroyed

    Awuh this is wicked cute && trueee

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow thats got a good structure to it. keep writing x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Excellent &well written

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara

    "....breaks my heart with joy.". Your end gave me goosebumps, this is a very good poem. 5/5