I really like this one. I loved how you made it three stanzas instead of only one. It expresses the emotions well! Great flow too! Keep up the good work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Oh that was so hauntingly beautiful. You express such depth of emotion in such few lines.
A true masterpiece.

I really like this! great job!!! keep it up!

Aww.. this is such a sad and heartfelt write. I loved the first stanza.. You had amazing imagery and great word usage in this. Great job! 5/5
& thanks for your comment on my poem :)

This is a good poem, you did a good job, but not perfect, it could be better, overall 4/5

I thought this was written really well...it was worded really beautifully and im kinda just in a bit of an awe...it was like dazzaling..awesome job 5/5

Did you just start writing, because WOW. I have read only 2 poems, and they are just breathtaking, so amazing, so much emotion. You have a wonderful skill.

For your first poem, that is amazing! I love how you used three Senryu's & made it one big poem. This poem seemed so deep, you used perfect descriptive words to put your message across. Keep it up hun, you have talent! =] 5/5

Tammie

5/5. I really liked it. You didnt put her, him, or they. You discribed it as everyone. Great poem!

I can't believe how creative. You have such orignality. I have to have you in my favorites. Well done. 5/5 God Bless.

~*TAY*~