This is really powerful. superb writing!!!

Wow. i really really like this because i am a very BIG contridictor to eating disorders and i always try to help girls get over them. i love this poem because it shows the pain you feel when your in that position. 5/5

p.s. thankz for tha comment.

Wow....I loved the message in this. There are so many disorders that people are plagued with in this day and time. The fact that this one also has an effect on self esteem and the way we see others is heartbreaking. Thank you for bringing to light a serious situation that is not only affecting our teens but adults of all ages. Sad thing is I know a couple of young guys that this has affected and society portrays it as a female problem. Great Job.
Dixie