Tiny Dancers [Haiku]

by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥   Nov 4, 2006


Puddles of darkness
Brightened by tiny dancers
Glowing in the sky

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A japenese form that contains the syllable count of 5/7/5 and is about some form of nature

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Once again. Wonderful. You are a very creative writer! Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 God Bless.

    ~*Tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by fIND ME SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW

    Short and sweet.
    Ilike it!

    lol♥ xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    It's short and quaint. i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I'm not so good and commenting on these types of poems, complex and ... hard to do! I give you a 5 because from what I know... its great :)

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I think your talking about the skys! I dont know if my guess is good or not but it think it was that. Its very good!

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