Comments : Tiny Dancers [Haiku]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Very creative Haiku!

    With a very mind capturing imagery.
    Well done, little princess

    Welcome to R.T.V.W , the door is open come on in.
    Luanne

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This is a very nice haiku...ive tried haikus and theyre not as easy as they appear, very well done:)5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Wonderfully written. You're talking about stars twinkling in the night sky right? Well, great imagery! Keep up the good work!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Really good, job, I'm also gonna say stars, but something tells me its more complicated then that

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I think this is about stars in the sky, as many other people have guessed. I really like this, as you haven't come straight out & said it, but described it in different ways. A creative way of writing. Keep it up. =] 5/5

    Tammie

  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I think your talking about the skys! I dont know if my guess is good or not but it think it was that. Its very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I'm not so good and commenting on these types of poems, complex and ... hard to do! I give you a 5 because from what I know... its great :)

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni

    It's short and quaint. i like it

  • Short and sweet.
    Ilike it!

    lol♥ xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Once again. Wonderful. You are a very creative writer! Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 God Bless.

    ~*Tay*~