by Lu
Very creative Haiku! |
This is a very nice haiku...ive tried haikus and theyre not as easy as they appear, very well done:)5/5 |
Wonderfully written. You're talking about stars twinkling in the night sky right? Well, great imagery! Keep up the good work! |
Really good, job, I'm also gonna say stars, but something tells me its more complicated then that |
by Goran Rahim
This is a nice poem |
by Tammie
I think this is about stars in the sky, as many other people have guessed. I really like this, as you haven't come straight out & said it, but described it in different ways. A creative way of writing. Keep it up. =] 5/5 |
5/5. I think your talking about the skys! I dont know if my guess is good or not but it think it was that. Its very good! |
I'm not so good and commenting on these types of poems, complex and ... hard to do! I give you a 5 because from what I know... its great :) |
by Jenni
It's short and quaint. i like it |
Short and sweet. |
Once again. Wonderful. You are a very creative writer! Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5 God Bless. |