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Hey haha this is how i've felt on many occasions... something i can say about it is that at the beginning, you seem to do a rhyming kind of thing, but then as the poem goes on, it sort of fades and doesnt really have a certain form. if thats how you wanted it to be, then nevermind what i just said, but if not, well i hope that helped:)

This isnt my favourite of urs but still was good... keep it up

Commernt for the poem you requested.

i voted on the poem you requested but i couldnt commenbt on it
so here it is

this'll be the 3rd attempt at commenting on this poem...so dont say i didnt try!

I know ppl say rhyming isnt everything, which is true. i jsut prefer it.

i liked the orignality in this piece, it gave it a much more interesting way to look at it.

5/5

~Emma

Wow. this poem is so true, and something that I am sure everyone on this site has experienced more than once.

I always listen to music as I write, and it usually gives me inspiration, though sometimes I sit thinking about the song, and singing, and doing everything else to distract myself. You really portrayed that in this poem!

That was really unique, it made me laugh and made me think, i wish i could do that. but you are really talented, i like your work