Look at me daddy

by courtney   Nov 4, 2006


Look at me daddy,
See how much i have grown,
Look at me daddy,
See how smart i have gotten,
Look at me daddy,
I can write like a pro,
look at me daddy,
I now know its not my fault,
Look at me daddy,
I now know its not your fault,
Look at me daddy,
You have missed so much,
Look at me daddy,
And you will see me laugh,
Look at me daddy,
And tell me if your proud

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  • 18 years ago

    by Julia

    Nice poem! Maybe next time you could try using a different syllable pattern. Otherwise great! Nice job!

    JuLiA

  • 18 years ago

    by Julia

    Nice poem! Maybe next time you could try using a different syllable pattern. Otherwise great! Nice job!

    JuLiA

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley and Katie

    Wow this is good you are great at this writing poems thing keep up the good work

    *Ashley Hager*

  • 18 years ago

    by UNbrOKen

    I really liked that it was really good u should keep on eriting youve got some skills show 'em off

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Aww. i really love it, ive been thruohg the same thing. its really good, tells the truth and i like that in a poem. keep it up babe your doin great 5/5 from me xx

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