Why is it so hard to let go? i too do not know and can relate. letting go is so much easier then holding on...and yet impossible to do...nicely written :)

This very beautiful thank you

This poem is very well written and very understandable my friends have been stuck in these situations and theyve come to me for help.....

Wow so true it is so hard to let go of someone you love so much I am going through it myself right now and as you said even on my death bed I will never let it go great line love it you are very talented kepp it up 5/5

Aww.....that was so cool...i havetn been able to write a poem about rose and this was was so cool.."the rose you gave me long ago
i hold onto it still
a love that was lost long ago
a love for which i'd kill"
this part was my fav..its awesome! keep it up! ur a great poet!

Deep....and good

B-e-a-utiful. The only thing I think you could fix is:

-Capitalize every letter in the beginning of each rhyme.

-One stanza didn't flow correctly:

i know i'll never let it go
this rose composed of blood
the more and more i miss you
means the deeper the thorns go

Maybe put:

This rose composed of blood.
I know I'll never let it go,
The more and more I miss you,
Means the deeper the thorns go.

I know that go's rhyme twice, but it rhymes.

Other than that, I LOVED IT! You really have a nack for writing poetry. Your rhyming was amazing. Great Job!

5/5

Hey,
beautiful i have no other words for it, its very sweet and the flow is great (as usely)
you really have talent;)
kisses stephanie

Its really good but idk maybe you could add a little more but otherwise good job. keep it up.

Another great poem do you write from personal experience? Keep it up

Very good poem! keep it up!

Wow i really like ur poem...that is so cool. i can relate
5/5
-Yumi