My Inspiration

by Laybelled with a name   Nov 4, 2006


You laugh at me endlessly,
your brain is full of lies,
you forgot about me years ago,
never even said goodbye

you, my morbid friend,
i hate you so much,
i'd do anything to kill you,
even just a little punch,

but you'll never leave me alone,
you'll always be there to hurt,
you think im ok,
my my mind is so cursed,

but whenever you speak,
its like i want to scream and shout
because your speaking to my heart,
and my soul is screaming out

you make me so depressed,
from eveything you do,
you are my inspiration,
and i dearly thank you...

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  • 17 years ago

    by TearsInTheRain

    Really explanitory. And real. Its great. Luv it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Strider

    Nice twist and turn of events right at the end. It kept the reader tracing through the words

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    But whenever you speak,
    its like i want to scream and shout
    because your speaking to my heart,
    and my soul is screaming out

    you make me so depressed,
    from eveything you do,
    you are my inspiration,
    and i dearly thank you...

    ^ those too paragraphs are great =]
    as is the poem on a whole,
    as i read it i felt that there was great feeling within the poem =]
    weldone keep it up =]

    ~*~Jen~*~

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