But whenever you speak,
its like i want to scream and shout
because your speaking to my heart,
and my soul is screaming out

you make me so depressed,
from eveything you do,
you are my inspiration,
and i dearly thank you...

^ those too paragraphs are great =]
as is the poem on a whole,
as i read it i felt that there was great feeling within the poem =]
weldone keep it up =]

~*~Jen~*~

Nice twist and turn of events right at the end. It kept the reader tracing through the words

Really explanitory. And real. Its great. Luv it.