I'm not kidding when i say this would make a great song! To be honest, I sung it, i didn't just read it. lol The rhyme scheme was great and i loved the last line! Keep it up!

xxEvilAngelxx

Hey I really like this poem. You did a really great job on it! Thank you so much for the comment on my poem. That means a lot to me....buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Wow great poem. Really made me think about life. 5/5 definantly.