Comments : Save your last breath

  • Great poem. Very short, but I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Awww..your back!!!:):):):):)...i was getting a little worried about you...but i'm so glad your back...this poem is very____ i can't find the right word but you can't just read this poem and understand it...it takes time to understand this poem i had to read it a bunch of times to really got it (if that makes any sence at all) all of your poems are so deep but this one is differnt it's deeper in adifferent sort of way...i hope your doing ok stay strong
    and DON'T EVER EVER STOP WRITTING because it would be a grave loss if you stoped you have soooooo much talent

    from your good friend auna:P

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem i can see that you have an awesome talent, let me know when you post more, shanik