The Photo of You

I really enjoy this. I read it first as though they passed away, but then I realized it was "day we meet" not meet again. It has a smooth rhythm and is simple, but sweet and not childish.

A few minor things:

I wish it was* real
The photo of you
I wish you where* near
So I could touch your soft skin

'was' should technically be 'were', for grammatical purposes.
Was is past tense, which would mean " I wish this photo used to be real, but now it is real", whereas I think you mean "I wish that this photo would be real (now)"

Similarly, 'where' should be 'were'. Where is the location, were is the subjunctive of be (see above).

I see your point about the filler words...simple is best. I love this one as well!

The ending was completely unexpected. I really enjoyed that part. When I was reading it, it seemed as if the person in this poem was talking about someone that they had loved and lost not someone that they were waiting to meet. Well done I've never read a poem like that before very original and I really liked it.

What a great poem 5/5

Aww. That was Delectable, charming, and passionate. Great choice of words. I loved the imagery, it was cute.

5.5