Awwww such a sweet poem. Who knew two Italians would fall in love? =] Beautifully written Jobo 5/5 |
by dora
Aww that was really touching. good job xx |
"The happiness glows |
by Cyma Khan
Gr8 poem!!! |
Aww, cute poem! In the last line, I think you mean "meet" not "met". Also, this line: "And when I'm not" in the fifth stanza doesn't fit, the flow is off... I would suggest changing it to something else... Other than that, wonderful job! |
by Tormented
Awww, that was so CUTE! |
Very nice. Emotions are greatly conveyed in this. |
This poem reflects a lot of romantic imagery. I wiil say again that it takes talent to make a poem flow freely. You have that talent |
by ashley
Omg that how i fill about my ex but its even harder cuz he left me and he sits there and say he still love me....lol... |
Another beautifully written poem... i loved it 5/5 keep it up |
by Monika
Omg i love this poem its exacally like i feel omg omg i love it great jog wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously i think this is the best it matches my every feeling! |
Wow, this is deep... ^-^ 5/5 |
by maymay
I love this poem. it is amazing, i know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote it, amazing poem! |
by Jyoti Rawat
Nice Poem. I love it. |
by Wada
This peom is one of the sweetest love peoms ive ever read, |
by e LIZ a beth
Its cute. |
That is so passionate, it shouws how much you care for someone!! AWWW grat job keep it up :] |
by Gullan
Ohh such a sweet and nice poem u have written keep going on with ur nice poems |
by husbandlover
Awwww this is so cute!! |
by steve
Whys this not rated higher?? its got great feeling to it.... too many people think poetry has to rhyme |