Eternity

by theking   Nov 4, 2006


Wandering in darkness grope,
Finding not a glimpse of hope.
Fingers touch to find my way,
Each foot fall, my heart betrays
The fear which drives me through the day.

Suddenly the ground is lost,
Flailing arms as body's tossed.
Splashing down in crimson pool,
The warm embrace is much too cruel,
I curse this lowly, wretched fool.

Floundering in this self made hell,
Warmth increasing as I dwell,
Within the confines I create,
Screaming as myself berate,
Giving in to this, my fate.

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  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Good poem. Deep.

  • 18 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    Not bad. i like the flow. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by softmember

    The best poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Great poem is full of force and emotion and i can relate to it. 5/5 well done keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Hmm i have to say this ones my favourite out of the three. love it.
    dee