+.+ That was confusing. Lol +.+

I think that a good title would be In paradise, but thats just me

MY FAV STANZA:

'His loves taking me prisoner
my hearts doing time
He's got me in deep with the devil
in his hypnotizing eyes'

Nice ! I like your choice of words. Their very strong !

A title ? Sorry, nothing is popping into my head !

5/5

Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

This is a great poem wonder job lol thanks for the comment

keenan