Whats Wrong?

by Emma   Nov 5, 2006


I know Something is wrong
Sometimes You're just to strong
I don't know What to do,
When You wont let me through.
You hide everything
As If it is a good thing
I try to help and Understand
But you wont let that stand
I want to say
There is always a way
But It is so hard
When you put up your guard.
All you say is nothing
I can tell there is something
I guess All I can do
Is always stay True
Until you can See
This isn't how it has to be...

**I would love to know what you think about this so please Comment....

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  • 17 years ago

    by AmY

    I think u did a good job on this poem. i loved it. 5/5 :-)))

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This was a nice short poem, but i think if you give it more of a twist and make the rhyming not so simple, it would read a lot easier and sound better. Just give it a bit of a mature touch, thats what i think, Good job:)

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