Hey! Really goood poem! It flows really well, and its got great emotion. Just a few things:
"I face every day
Pretendin' i'm okay
so hard to move on
when i see you every day"
You may want to change the Everyday, it sorta ruins the flow of the poem.
And when you use the word cause you spell it cuase you might want to change that as well!
But really good job 5/5

Wow that was really good...but so sad...i like how you used part of that song by Rascal Flatts...it was very creative...well if your feeling bad i really hope you feel better soon...well great job!

Wow.. this is a really great poem.. but its sad im so sorry i hope things get better.. and me and my boyfriend havent broken up yet.. we're just going through a rough time =(... but i hope you feel better soon adn thanks for the comment on my poem

Wow! Thats another really good poem!

Great poem and it thinks it great how you used part of rascal flats song! i love that song! and also this poem keep up the good work!

Omg i love this poem it says alot and you can really fell your emotions 5/5.. thanx for the comment and thanx for adding me to your favorites. keep writing.
**Kelsey**