Nicely written

I commented this poem on the other site. I didn't even realise this account was you Jessy, until i went to read this & realised I had read it somewhere before. lol. Just to say it again, this was a truely wonderful poem. Plenty of strong emotions which stood out alot to me. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Tammie

So much emotion and depth in this poem! You definitaly have some talent! Keep up the great work!

xxEvilAngelxx

PS- I have a re-write for Autumn Calm because I just felt that the second one flowed better and used better vocabulary... Thx for the comment!

Here's what I really enjoyed about your poem:
Some of your descriptions while not too unique were done in a way that kept the reader's attention (or at least mine.) such as:
Tears of regret linger on fraying pained skin
Millions of unheard wishes remain not given
What I think you used to connect with reader's the most was this next line:
Desperately trying to turn back the clocks
How many people will be able to read that and remember just how they wish to turn back the clocks of their own life. Yet these painful mistakes make us us, right?
I think maybe you should see where descriptions can be taken out though. For example those same line could be reworked such as:
Tears linger on fraying pained skin
unheard wishes remain not given
Desperately trying to turn back clocks
You get the same message bu the effect is enhanced a bit by cuttign uneeded words the reader can already assume. But nice poem!

This is good. i'm sort of confused but i think maybe because i have low IQ. lol. anyways, it had a lot of great vocabulary and great description. i think it's not that bad. thankz for r/r/c mine. 5/5 for me!

Wow...

You're really great! You have an awesome vocabulary, and your rhyming is excellent. I love your first and last stanza the best.

Awesome Job Babe!
5/5

That was amazing. Very good poem.
You've got awesome talent! 5/5
God Bless.

~*Tay*~

An excellent poem, indeed.
I am stunned.

The Angel of Secrets

Great poem.5/5 keep up the good work.

I get the meaning of the poem pretty eaisly. the rhyming is good too.