This is truly beautiful. This poem has such strong and deep emotions in it. I loved the story that it told. Besides a few grammer error's and a few missing words that need to be put in, I say you have another masterpiece on your hands. Whenever a poem can pull me in from the beginning, keep me there, and make me wish that there was more, I call that a masterpiece. You have proved yourself again Sir, to be one of the most magnificent poets on this site. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

P.S. Thank you so much for the comments and votes on my poems. I really do appreciate them. I am sorry that I begun repaying the favor a few days ago, but I didn't finish because of a family emergency. I have two more to do, and I am hoping that they are as wonderful as this one.

I really enjoyed this heartfelt poem .Good work .

Beautiful, and captivating. The words seem to flow so easily, and they fit together so gracefully. Never do you produce a poem which is anything less than extraordinary, but this one is certainly amazing. Hope to see new stuff from you soon :) 5 of 5.

Blessed be,
Luna

BEAUTIFUL!!! I really loved this poem it reminded me of a poem my ex once wrote me. Thanx 4 the wonderful memory. Great writing i can't wait to read more of it.

xxxx
Erika E.

Though i could find so many of us going thro same stage of life but the way u potray ur feelings is just unique..& somehow reminds of our own pain....u give ur words those magic to relate ourselves so strongly...great write once again

all the best and take care

The depths to which I've traveled
My heart feeling like a stone
The true love that left me
That pain I now call home.

Gosh, I just love those lines. Such a sad poem of lost love. How do we go on after that?

Overall, the flow was great. There were a few lines that I had to reread, but in doing so, got the full meaning of it. Trully a heartbreaking piece.

Jeannie

Lovely write which Ive enjoyed reading.
and I can relate to this one, and for sure alot of people can relate to this one.

God Bless!

Beautiful. the detail was amazing and i loved the plot and the emotion. the way u talk about it as in the past is great and this thing is pouring with emotion.
love ya lots,
sore

THIS IS AN EXCELLENT POEM

This poem is beyond my wildest dreams. How I long for any guy to write such beautiful words about me....

Ohhhh thats so sweet. i luved it

So much sorrow, so much pain...but i see how much this person loved this girl..he just wanted her love, and to have her by his side, but fate was cruel...so sweet i love this poem. I hope you continue to write, you are very expressive, and i really really think you have talent.

Awesome poem. Loved the imagery.

Bravo what a beautiful story

Such a drawn out topic, yet you express it so uniquely. I can't find a single flaw in this poem; it's beautiful, expressive, descriptive, honest and so very sweet. In short, everything a love poem should be. I applaud your skill, and your honesty.
P.S. Thank you for the lovely comment.

Wow.. This poem almost made me cry. You did such an amazing job on describing everything in this. My absolute favorite stanza was:
Will these feelings ever leave me?
Do I really want them to?
I cling to them so dearly
They're all I've left of you.
I could relate to those the most. You have an amazing talent for writing sad love poems. I hope that you are okay :) But this poem is very beautifully written.. the flow and rhythm was great and held up ver well. Great job on this! Keep it up!

I LOVED UR POEM SO MUCH I POSTED IT ON MY MYSPACE PAGE I DID CHANGE THE SHES, HERS, INTO HIMS AND HES. BUT YOUR NAME IS STLL ON IT I WANT PEOPLE TO KNO U WROTE A BEAUTIFUL POEM. I CAN RELATE TO IT SO MUCH. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

This is so beautiful and sad. I can totally relate to all the feelings and the powerful emotions you have penned. Excellent write! 5/5

Beautifully written