Goodbye!

by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast   Nov 5, 2006


One tear,
Followed by two,
Tonight she'll be,
Dreaming of you.

Her dark room,
Her starless sky,
It kills her,
To say goodbye.

But you must understand,
It's not you,
You won't see it,
But it's true.

Her life is a mess,
Her heart is torn,
She regrets the day,
That she was born.

Your sweet words,
They make her smile,
And puts you in front,
By a mile.

But the smile won't last,
It's just there for show,
She's such a faker,
She's so f**king low.

She's not good enough,
They don't want her there,
So what if she's not happy,
She won't even dare.

Mum is screaming at her,
Saying she doesn't care,
Telling her she's worthless,
Her feelings she didn't spare.

Her older sister,
The perfect thing,
Making her feel,
Like she's mentally ill.

And her tall dad,
We can't forget,
Treating her like a slave,
Making her sweat.

So what is she,
Suppose to do?
She sits down,
And cries for you.

*Everything she feels for you,
She wrote on one piece of paper,
The one in your hand,
You won't understand,
How much it hurts to let you go.

She loves you,
With all her heart,
Sorry baby,
We must part.

*McFly - Too Close For Comfort

PLEASE COMMENT ** . I'll return the fava :) just ask :)

© Copyright 2006 By: Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

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  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Haha, love the mcfly bit :D

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    That is "Prisoner of paradise" sorry about that.

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    I love the poem babe and thanks for your comments on my poems. I found a title for the untitled poem of mine. It is "Prisoner of pardise". Tell me what u think is it fitting I thought so but I maybe wrong.

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I liked the poem and it was very deep, I think i may have missed something in though, but maybe I didn't!!! Ha well I personlayy give this a 5/5 and I wonder how this got under anything lower than that, but hey to each his own

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Hey you told me to check it out and I promised I would. Well I thought it was awesome,but so sad. Well I really like it. TTYL