by Michael D Nalley Nov 5, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Scribed by a master as eternity looking back |
by Bridgette
When I read this poem, it reminds me of love, but I know that you mean beauty by it. And I actually like it better when I think of it as beauty. You had some great vocabulary in this and it flowed very well. The rhyming worked very well.. and you described everything in this good also. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up! You are an amazing poet! |
Once again, very well done. I just don't see how I could say anything else. Your poems just aren't enough for words to describe. I loved it! 5/5 |
.................LOVE.................. |
by Michael
Christian? Islamic? You seem to be speaking of some sort of religious perspective. I enjoyed it. Thank you. |
Oohh. That''s so beautiful.. |